Author Topic: Freedom!  (Read 1902 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Offline InsaNe

  • Veteran Member
  • Posts: 6019
    • View Profile
    • http://www.gtastunting.com
Freedom!
« on: May 02, 2005, 05:47:38 AM »
Ok this is my second vid and is 63 megs in size and 5 mins long.
DL it, Watch it, Rate it, Rape it lol

Freedom

Offline marklund

  • Posts: 6166
    • View Profile
    • http://
Freedom!
« Reply #1 on: May 02, 2005, 06:09:24 AM »
downloading ;)

Offline Taclite

  • Veteran Member
  • Posts: 2002
    • View Profile
Freedom!
« Reply #2 on: May 02, 2005, 06:19:24 AM »
Downloading.. better be good.

Offline InsaNe

  • Veteran Member
  • Posts: 6019
    • View Profile
    • http://www.gtastunting.com
Freedom!
« Reply #3 on: May 02, 2005, 06:27:05 AM »
i watched this like 10 times, its so ownage  :P  

Offline Omni

  • Veteran Member
  • Posts: 3727
    • View Profile
Freedom!
« Reply #4 on: May 02, 2005, 06:35:51 AM »
^ :lol: But anyway..to the vid..

It was a good vid considering how long you've been around but there was WAY too many fillers...and not really any great stunts! The editing was pretty cool, the music was umm...not gonna comment :P! Anyway there is a lot of room for improvement dude..but you can gain any help or tips from here! Cool second vid 6/10!

Offline InsaNe

  • Veteran Member
  • Posts: 6019
    • View Profile
    • http://www.gtastunting.com
Freedom!
« Reply #5 on: May 02, 2005, 06:39:08 AM »
That music was pwnage! Alice Cooper owns  B)  

Offline ZeroX

  • Veteran Member
  • Posts: 4890
    • View Profile
Freedom!
« Reply #6 on: May 02, 2005, 06:42:02 AM »
You need to work on doing some more original stunts, also try to land on roofs instead of on the ground. You can grind ok, its definately your strong point, I liked that grind on the non-grindable rail in front of sunshine autos.

To me it looks like you need to put more time into your stunts, you have only been around a little bit though so its understandable.

Put more time into doing some better stunts and don't try to rush the video and you might do good. :)

Offline InsaNe

  • Veteran Member
  • Posts: 6019
    • View Profile
    • http://www.gtastunting.com
Freedom!
« Reply #7 on: May 02, 2005, 06:47:45 AM »
This video tooks me 1 day  :lol:   Anytime i have some pwnage stunts ready for my 3rd vid and i got roofs and sick spins for that. And i try to have ownage grinds for that too.

Thanks for good feedback dude  B)
 
« Last Edit: May 02, 2005, 08:05:17 AM by InsaNe »

Offline InsaNe

  • Veteran Member
  • Posts: 6019
    • View Profile
    • http://www.gtastunting.com
Freedom!
« Reply #8 on: May 02, 2005, 08:05:47 AM »
huh  :saywhat:  lol

Offline Otaka

  • Veteran Member
  • Posts: 670
  • Date Registered: December 18, 2004
    • View Profile
Freedom!
« Reply #9 on: May 02, 2005, 09:25:10 AM »
6/10

sorry dude, but no mercy for anyone, not even for comrades.

Focus more on ur stunts, and look up from other vids and try to make same kind of.

Offline Nitzkit

  • Moderator
  • Posts: 7183
    • View Profile
Freedom!
« Reply #10 on: May 02, 2005, 11:01:54 AM »
DLed. *Watching*

Yeah, it was alright. But stunts must be completed, don't bail. You know the deal, kind of like what Otaka said (if it made sense to you :lol: )
« Last Edit: May 02, 2005, 11:15:30 AM by Nitzkit »

Offline InsaNe

  • Veteran Member
  • Posts: 6019
    • View Profile
    • http://www.gtastunting.com
Freedom!
« Reply #11 on: May 02, 2005, 11:14:01 AM »
Ok i didn't fade off or visible bail stunts anymore  ;)  

Offline Docta Luv

  • Veteran Member
  • Posts: 2392
    • View Profile
    • http://
Freedom!
« Reply #12 on: May 02, 2005, 03:55:43 PM »
That was a pretty good second video.  Music was alright, stunts were pretty good except for a few, and editing needs a bit more work.  Pretty solid IMO though.

7/10

Offline Mini-Me

  • Posts: 297
    • View Profile
    • http://
Freedom!
« Reply #13 on: May 02, 2005, 04:04:41 PM »
I agree with them. Bailing sucks unless something happens that amazing.

And Alice Cooper does own! I just saw him in Waynes World the other day...weird. :unsure:

Offline Test Bear

  • Veteran Member
  • Posts: 2497
    • View Profile
    • http://
Freedom!
« Reply #14 on: May 02, 2005, 04:27:47 PM »
Editing was fine. Stunts were mehish. Work on roofing and grinding. They'll get you far.

6/10

 

SimplePortal 2.3.7 © 2008-2024, SimplePortal