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Offline Daffy

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« Reply #75 on: July 24, 2008, 04:28:25 AM »
Man do i feel disorientated.

You have some editing skills but there was a lot of random effects and overbrightening which made it hard to enjoy most of the stunts.
Also the camera angles suffered pretty bad from constant shaking and too much zooming in which didn't give any overview.
The stunts went from average to godlike, next time try to give each stunt the attention and love they deserve instead of over-editing them to the point where it gets frustrating.

All in all i can see you tried hard but too hard to my taste, be a little more humble next time.
6,5/10.

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« Reply #76 on: July 24, 2008, 08:48:18 AM »
Thanks for your comment Daffy. I know what you mean, but like i said in the first post, editing was very expermental, and so i wondered where are the comments about overediting and so on.

@ all: Well, because a few want a Userbar of me, here it is, i hope you like it:


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« Reply #77 on: July 24, 2008, 01:09:13 PM »
Rly great solo man, keep it up. U improved so much form ur last movies, many good and very good inf stunts,  I love car stunts. For sure I dont lost anything, but Darkstar do.

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« Reply #78 on: July 24, 2008, 03:22:59 PM »
Cool Movies, GJ Man.. 9/10


Editing Pretty Ownage..

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« Reply #79 on: July 29, 2008, 07:35:34 AM »
Main: sexy

0.46-1.04 weird grind
1.04-1.28 cool one, nice landing at the end
1.28-1.48 huge dis o,o
1.48-1.57 again nice distance i wanted to land it with nrg but i failed
1.57-2.06 looks like a bitch to land
2.06-2.17 old but cool
2.17-2.52 belive me it was a bitch to land like this
2.52-3.05 pretty cool and tricky stunt
3.04-3.12 sick idea, you pwned a fucking noob stunt!
3.12-3.26 cool but its pos without the car
3.26-3.34 dosn't look that hard but cool
3.34-3.46 freaky stunt!
3.46-3.55  double bump powa!
3.55~4.12 cool but i am sure its pos without packer !
4.12-4.20  sexy
4.20-4.28 freaky precesion
4.28-4.35 u could have landed the higher part ;<
4.35-4.45 isnt that possible naturaly? like kaynt did on the left roof in a old solo, but nvm cool stunt
4.45-4.56 nice distance but weird landing
4.56-5.05 fucking awesome!
5.05-5.14 whats the distance?
5.14-5.20  

Outro:

5.30-5.33 durchfly
5.37-5.41 LOL STUCK
5.42-5.56 high three

Editing: pretty awesome

Intro: Sexy


Music:

Overall:

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« Reply #80 on: July 29, 2008, 07:58:46 AM »
Great job, man!! -kevin

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« Reply #81 on: July 30, 2008, 06:45:19 PM »
Well uploaded it on www.noobflicks.com, because that shit with Vimeo... Quality is very good, nearly as good as on vimeo. Great Site!

http://www.noobflicks.com/watch/2032/onmyown

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« Reply #82 on: July 31, 2008, 02:11:20 AM »
I enjoyed watching the video. Well, okay it was a bit too overedited with the enb mode and stuff but I really liked some effects and the pan/crop things. The music was cool, too. Overall a pretty nice video.

I'll give a 9/10

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« Reply #83 on: July 31, 2008, 02:13:18 AM »
Youre a Infy Wh0re! infy stunting pwnds.

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« Reply #84 on: July 31, 2008, 04:40:30 PM »
Added another HD-Stream(YES, im searching for an alternative for Vimeo...):

http://beta.vreel.net/watch_23146.html

(You can click the Zango-Popup away, often the video works although- but i think noobflicks is better anyway   )

 

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