Corruption

[Ralleee]

You took the words right out of my mouth, Daffy.  Great video dude, I really enjoyed watching it, and it's an awesome song, made me enjoy it even more. Good job.

[Vicarious]

You should enlarge your diversity of stunts by doing more grinds and different kinds of stunts.

Yea im working on that now  

I see some potential in you, i'm kinda tempted to give you some spots that's new to give you a little jump start as i think you can do well.

...im not holding ya back    j/k

Next time try to not have those huge black bars on each side of the video so it covers the whole screen.

yea i dont really know what happened there..must have rendered it in the right resolution or something...

[NoAPOlogies]

I think it was a pretty darn good vid for a first try. Just a few tips:

- Use the whole song in the vid. It looks a whole lot better when the whole song is put in the vid instead of cutting it short.
- A few of those stunts looked really dark, I have problems like that when I stunt in LC sometimes. I don't know what program you used to edit the vid but i'm sure there is a "brighten" feature
- I'd love to see more variety in your next vid, a few grinds for example. Try some taxi boosts as well (I love them!).

All in all I see a lot of potential in you, keep up the good work!

[Daffy]

Alright, hit me up on MSN : [email protected]

[Vicarious]

- Use the whole song in the vid. It looks a whole lot better when the whole song is put in the vid instead of cutting it short.

that actually wasnt my fault, i downloaded the song from limewire since iw as lust looking for a decent song that would suit a stunting video, that came up and i liked it so i downloaded it...didnt know it was cut short though, i thought that was just how it ended...i thought it sounded wierd  

[ravenger]

i didn't like'd the edit btw song was pretty normal..
5,5/10