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Offline MaCi

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« on: April 18, 2007, 08:14:30 AM »
Here's my first solovid. I've been working with it for a while and I want you to comment it very hard so I know what to change for my next vid; Enjoy it..  
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« Reply #1 on: April 18, 2007, 09:36:53 AM »
its ok for a first solo

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« Reply #2 on: April 18, 2007, 09:44:04 AM »
Oldschool   Really loved it, you got lot of potential. Keep it up

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« Reply #3 on: April 18, 2007, 10:15:56 AM »
youreally got potential. i was impressed for the Dessert grind of yours. keep like that and you'll become the man above me one day

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« Reply #4 on: April 18, 2007, 10:28:22 AM »
Not bad dude.

There are a lot of old stunts, but some are new.

Keep that up.

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« Reply #5 on: April 19, 2007, 01:02:27 AM »
Really great basic spots =)

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« Reply #6 on: April 19, 2007, 03:07:59 AM »
 awesome for a first vid!!
the editing was even good for WMM, keep it up

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« Reply #7 on: April 19, 2007, 11:13:24 AM »
Nice collection of simple stunts .

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« Reply #8 on: April 19, 2007, 08:05:34 PM »
Cool solo video mate, thanks for sharing. A few older spots but that cant be helped in a first video, just watch alot of past videos and get chummy with one of the veterans around here so that you can find out if spots you are trying are new or old. I like some of your ideas, really creative stuff...just look at what stunts you did best in the video and push that area further and further. I really liked the quarry fence grind, good speed to the grind and smooth transition from the krail.


Editing tips: If a stunt is done at night, try to adjust the brightness and contrast settings so that it is a bit more visible, a few stunts were hard to see properly. Also try to synch up an impact point of a stunt, such as a bump or landing with similar points in a song it helps the flow of the video (at say 2:19 there was a cymbal crash, you couldve moved the clip so The Only One's bump was on that) and try to cut between clips on the beat as well. With fx try not to use the default fx instead mix things up and try to have a common theme to your effects so that the video feels more like a whole. Also pick a song that starts and finishes with a the stunts, rather than just fading out

It was a solid first video, I just decided to ramble to help you improve your editing and stunting, best of luck with future videos  The best advice I could give would be: watch alot of videos and see what people do right and wrong, that is the best way to improve. I get most of my ideas watching other peoples videos

 

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