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Stunt Crew Network => Xtreme Stunting Alliance => Hall Of Fame => XSA Video Releases => Topic started by: Omni on August 30, 2005, 03:48:43 PM
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Yeah, its me again, with a new solo vid.
Maybe I madew this a bit quick but I don't care. Its my first time using Vegas to edit so hopefully better editing. Stunts aren't my best but meh..Oh and don't mind the dodgy recordings on a couple of stunts because I deleted the rep after recording so could only use what I had as I have no time to repeat them.
Anyhow without further ado.
Deceived: Yousendit Link. (http://s32.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1R6G4TPEHI8WV363Q1FNBI8NQX)
FF link (http://files.filefront.com/Deceived_Finalwmv/;4089777;;/fileinfo.html)
Comment and rate people..And I want constructive criticism.
Also this will be my last solo vid for a long time, if not ever in SA.
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downloading, how come your last?
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Meh, finding it hard to get new spots that are really :o ..as you may find in this vid..getting boredish of stunting, and I got a levels this year so won't have much time for it.
What i should really have said was last SOLO vid:P Because I gotta take part in THR:SA when it comes around ;)
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Wow..longest video i havn't seen, i was expecting something a little longer :( i think it was around 53 seconds or something...anyway nice stunts.
and that's about it lol
-Brainkiller
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What vid did you you watch dude? This vid was 4:30 last time I checked :S The intro is longer than what you said it was :S
I think you might have meant to post that in Torques vid topic.
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sorry man, i was thinking of that vice city one that was recently released, soory that is the effects of browsiing other topics when downloading a video. wups....*copies text and pastes it to other topic*
oh and BTW i am about to download YOUR video.
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Oh pants! :o Great vid, like i said on MSN, I liked it better than SA Smackdown! Sad to hear about the last vid for a while thing. :( Fantastic vid, again. Some great combos. I was waiting for a vid like this so I could get back into SA. :o :o :o
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:wub: Cheers Calcos..even if you are the only one that likes it, just from that comment I will be chuffed for a long time. :P
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Sweet dude! I loved this vid, it's one of them videos that just makes you wanna stunt, your really creative with yoru stunts in this and have thought about it loads ( the stunting ) Editing isn't OMFG amazing but it's pretty decent, and as you said it's your first time in vegas, music rocks, 1) because I love A7X, and 2) because it goes with the 'theme' of it and stunts.
Graphics at the beginning rocks! :unsure: I wonder who did them, whoever he is, he deserves a medal, or some credit :P Anwyays. 9.525/10 :lol: GJ dude.
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Wow man youve put out more vids than XSA, me thinks if you would have waited you would have had an awsome vid, if you had combined your stunts from all your solos.
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Wow man youve put out more vids than XSA, me thinks if you would have waited you would have had an awsome vid, if you had combined your stunts from all your solos.
So you didn't enjoy it or what? :saywhat: And more vids is better than one IMO.
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Juan, comment on the video, not the amount he's done. C+C he wants, and that doesn't stand for Crap+ more Crap. K? :nono:
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wow eberyone seems pretty happy accept me :( it only downloaded half of the video for some reason o_0. but what i saw of it it was really cool, like somebody said very creative and i think that is twice in differenct videos now that i have seen you land on the Amm-u-nation roof lol...damn i hope that was you or i will sound like a fool. anyway from what i saw of it, it was fucking great :-)...keep em coming...please?
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Juan, comment on the video, not the amount he's done. C+C he wants, and that doesn't stand for Crap+ more Crap. K? :nono:
Well i already told him what i thought, and that statement was on his previous solos, this vid rocked sorry about the confusion.
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Juan: NP man, it was just confusing :P
Cheers for the kind comments everyone.
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Enjoyed the vid. Good stunts, especially the pack 2 roof 2 bumps. All around enjoyable, had a good vibe, so now i'm gonna go stunt. :D
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I officially deem you packer2roof2bump whore, k? :D
awesome vid, loved it
9/10 (editing was... kinda bad
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I officially deem you packer2roof2bump whore, k? :D
awesome vid, loved it
9/10 (editing was... kinda bad
Omni's the best SA combo stunter out there. :o
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dling man hope its not ur last
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downloading..., this should be awesome :D
edit: :blink: :blink: :blink:
awesome :D
I really think you're one of the best SA solo stunters!
This one was even more impressive than Ascent, it's a shame this is your last vid for a while... :(
Good job man, 9/10
btw, Pizzaboy stunting rocks :grin:
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:nono:
will be awesome
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Dling.Wheres marklund these days?
Sweet vid to go out on.Plenty of originality.Good use of all vehicles.Great editing as well.
Didnt notice the music really.Id give this a 9/10.Great vid,just a shame its your last :(
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haven't heard of him since a few days, last thing he pm'd me he sayd he was .. with an 'uncle' :blink:
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:D Cheers for kind comments dudes. But sweet, why was the editng bad? :S
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dling bling
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Thanks for the comments DC..and this is not my last SA vid,..just last solo for a long time..I: ain't stopping this stunting lark just yet :P
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omg, amazing stunts, i love this vid... :)
the combos were awesome!
how long did it take to do all this great stunts??
Stunts: 9.99952 / 10
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Hehe cheers Tromeo...well some stunts depend if I'm lucky and I get the hang of what I'm doing quickl;y..for instance the combo in Las venturas took me 2 attempts :blink:
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hey omni sweet vid its been the best sa vid in a long time,
cheers man :grin:
i didnt like the music but i no its not easy to find a song that everyone likes
but in the end its all about the stunts and this vid rocked :grin: :grin:
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Nice vid Omni!
I was a bit scared when I saw "...last vid...". I´m glad you´re not stopping.
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9/10 nice vid :)
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d/ling
Amazing stunts. The backward stoppie combo was great.
9/10
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d/ling :) really wanna see it :) i am busy with my last solo either.
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Needs better editing. Like the lightning thing.. It just looks noobish.. But the stuntes were great :D
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Dling... but I'll have to go to bed when it's finished...half past 10...complete bs IMO..
Just watched it, and it's great.
Stunts: 8/10: Varied, but a bit too much Packer stunts IMO. Too bad it's your last solo vid..
Editing: 7/10: Nice, relaxed editing. Nothing too flashy, though it did feel a little simple to me..
Music: 7/10: It wasn't really bad, but if it felt right... Not really. It did suit the vid quite well.
Overall: 7.3/10: A shame that it's your last vid!
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Needs better editing. Like the lightning thing.. It just looks noobish.. But the stuntes were great :D
That was PS work, and IMO the editing was fine, not full of annoying effects like many videos nowadays.
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Downloading ama bob
Hey dude alot of improvement in this vid in terms of stunts and editing. Loved the combo stunt in LV near the eastern part of the ringroad and the wallride was sweet :D. Still a few stunts that could have been left out but otherwise very cool. Editing was better and some nice use of effects however you missed some synching at times.
Keep improving like you have been and :grin: will always be there :D
Oh maybe try some fcr stunts or combos in the next vid if you find a particular stunt/combo too easy with an nrg just a thought
Well done :grin:
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since my d/l stoped at about 6% I only saw the first stunt....but it was awsome.
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since my d/l stoped at about 6% I only saw the first stunt....but it was awsome.
The first stunt was the best its all crap after.....no seriously im actually really joking
It is a vid worth trying again for
EDIT: Fav stunt apart from the wallride at 2:30
Also i noticed very few stunts in SF
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Cheers guys. Thanks for the cool comment Krem. Glad you enjoyed it :)
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Needs better editing. Like the lightning thing.. It just looks noobish.. But the stuntes were great :D
That was PS work, and IMO the editing was fine, not full of annoying effects like many videos nowadays.
lol, I know everyone didn't like the orange effect thingy I put in my video, since everyone seems to be picking on that aspect every time I say the edit of their video was good, but still: The editing of your video wasn't good. That's the point. Not that you didn't put effects in it. It was simply not good.
That it was Ps work isn't an excuse. It didn't look good.
As allways, I'm not trying to hurt anyone. It's just my opinion.
.. but for the stunts, great work! :D
Oh, and what does 'IMO' mean?
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IMO means, In My Opinion.
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Needs better editing. Like the lightning thing.. It just looks noobish.. But the stuntes were great :D
That was PS work, and IMO the editing was fine, not full of annoying effects like many videos nowadays.
lol, I know everyone didn't like the orange effect thingy I put in my video, since everyone seems to be picking on that aspect every time I say the edit of their video was good, but still: The editing of your video wasn't good. That's the point. Not that you didn't put effects in it. It was simply not good.
That it was Ps work isn't an excuse. It didn't look good.
As allways, I'm not trying to hurt anyone. It's just my opinion.
.. but for the stunts, great work! :D
Oh, and what does 'IMO' mean?
The thing is GC you never say WHY the editing is not good. All my snychs were in time with the music, the camerawork apart from those stunts i mentioned were well done, there was slow mo when needed, speed up when needed, on the slower sections EG the BMX stunt I put a cold Sepia effect to make it go well with the music...
To be honest, I am saying this because i cannot find any way in which the editing could be considered below average.
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You will see in my next SA solo:
Krail to Grind with Freeway
130 Feets P2B
So prepare to be owned Omni :rock:
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I already have a krail 2 grind in a freeway dude :P but 130ft PB is :o
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Needs better editing. Like the lightning thing.. It just looks noobish.. But the stuntes were great :D
That was PS work, and IMO the editing was fine, not full of annoying effects like many videos nowadays.
lol, I know everyone didn't like the orange effect thingy I put in my video, since everyone seems to be picking on that aspect every time I say the edit of their video was good, but still: The editing of your video wasn't good. That's the point. Not that you didn't put effects in it. It was simply not good.
That it was Ps work isn't an excuse. It didn't look good.
As allways, I'm not trying to hurt anyone. It's just my opinion.
.. but for the stunts, great work! :D
Oh, and what does 'IMO' mean?
The thing is GC you never say WHY the editing is not good. All my snychs were in time with the music, the camerawork apart from those stunts i mentioned were well done, there was slow mo when needed, speed up when needed, on the slower sections EG the BMX stunt I put a cold Sepia effect to make it go well with the music...
To be honest, I am saying this because i cannot find any way in which the editing could be considered below average.
Yeah, syncing was good and all that, but synching isn't all there is to videos. Synching is actually a very little part of editing. Look at many music videos and such and look at how they're synched.
Ok, I was just too lazy to say anything about why this time :P I think I told you alot the last time you gave out a video, but I'm not sure if that was you.
Here goes:
1. First, the intro was kinda cool, but you faded the shot out when the camera "Hit" CJ for no reason. There was no bang in the music that "said" you should've done that. The music was going as it had gone all the way from the start. It just faded, for no reason.
.. and then suddenly it comes back.. and nothing new happends.. It's still CJ standing there..
2. Then there's the lightning thing. It does look cool or real or anything. It just looks noobish. If you had to use lightning you should've used the in-game lightning. Like just used cam hack and wait till there's raining and shot till you get it. Now that would have been cool!
Oh, and you could've taken the time to make the "Name of the video"-picture full screen. If you look at the left and right top corner when that picture is there you'll see the lightning rays just stop. So that's also something that contributes to the "noobishness" of the whole lightning thingy.
3. When you make the sceen with the lightning and the name of the video and all, there's a small overlap from the next sceen (with CJ doing a grind). You can see CJ jump onto the grind behind the 'Name of the game'-picture (or sceen or whatever) in the left and right side of the screen.
4.This is a very small thing, and I'm not sure if it has anyting with the editing to do so this might be all wrong. There's some sort of white stripe that kinda blinks in the right buttom corner of the screen in the stunt at 1:33 (I think). It's not a big thing, but if it some sort of "left overs" of experimenting with the editing, you should've taken more time to go over the video to look for errors.
5. You started the taxi stunt (at 1:51) alittle too soon. We didn't get to see that start. It kinda starts when the taxi hit's the car and then jumps off it. So you should've started that shot alittle sooner, if you know what I mean.
6.Then theres the Sephia effect. It was a good idea and you choice the exact right time in the video to add it, but.. and this is my opinion.. it's alittle too grey. And you should've alittle better color choice for it.
I think you speed it up alittle too much at one point there too..
7. Then the stunt at 3:30. The music has these rapid bangs (if you know what I mean) at the end of that stunt. And you choice to put in that white flash effect at the point, right? But the first 3 or 4 "bangs" and the flashes at that moment arn't that all synchined. I thought you had just put one white flash over all those "bangs" instead of making a small gap between them. So in the music you have 3-4 bang, and in the video you have ONE long (if you can call it that) white flash.
You did put that last bang right though (the one AFTER the 3-4 bangs I was talking about. The one with the bass drum only).
8. The credits were ok, but I think you should've used alittle more time on making them alittle more special. You don't need to do much, but what you had there wa sjust the simple, plain, unoriginal scrolling credits. Nothing special just scrolling.
Not that theres anything wrong with that, but I think you should've put alittle more effort into them, cause credits are the least exiting part of the video, so you should've at least treid to make it at least alittle mroe exiting. I'm talking about nothing more then like maybe a white outline on some of the text or something like that.. It doesn't take much, but alittle mroe exitment would'nt hurt.
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Now, that said, I'm not trying to hurt youor anything. Just trying to give constructive critism. I know I should tell everyone, not only the "grade" for the video, but also what I feel they should do to make it better, but if I were to say all this everytime I felt the editing wasn't too good, I'd simply be dead by now.
Edit: Oh, and one more thing about the credits:
- You used underline not only on the headlines, but on ALL of the text. Underlining should be used only the thing you want to bring out like the headlines..
Edit (again):
- There seems to be something behind the text in the credit, but it too dark. So if there IS something behind it you should've made it alittle more visible..
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Cheers for that but to tell the truth i would call that nitpicking...anyone can find the slightest little thing wrong with a vid..I could do it for ANY video.
Firstly about the intro if you notice the song does a little dischord section when the camera blinks.
Secondly, I don't care if the lightning looked noobish, I thought it didn't and a mate of mine made it so I felt obliged to put it in. Then I tried to make the next transition work but whatever i did the clip started before the end of the "Deceived" title. I couldn't help that, maybe a problem in Vegas.
Your next point i didn't understand..I can't even notice what your talking about so it can't matter that much.
Your fifth point again is a nitpick. that was just a small filler taxi stunt so i could synch the vid better, nothing more.
Your next point is ok a good point, but it was hard to do, it was my first time in Vegas and it was close to being right..it was not one flash like you said.
Credits are credits. Who gives a FUCK.
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Cheers for that but to tell the truth i would call that nitpicking...anyone can find the slightest little thing wrong with a vid..I could do it for ANY video.
Firstly about the intro if you notice the song does a little dischord section when the camera blinks.
Secondly, I don't care if the lightning looked noobish, I thought it didn't and a mate of mine made it so I felt obliged to put it in. Then I tried to make the next transition work but whatever i did the clip started before the end of the "Deceived" title. I couldn't help that, maybe a problem in Vegas.
Your next point i didn't understand..I can't even notice what your talking about so it can't matter that much.
Your fifth point again is a nitpick. that was just a small filler taxi stunt so i could synch the vid better, nothing more.
Your next point is ok a good point, but it was hard to do, it was my first time in Vegas and it was close to being right..it was not one flash like you said.
Credits are credits. Who gives a FUCK.
Well, you said you noticed that dischord NOW. You should've know about it when you made the video, but I'm going to assume that was just wrong typing. But still, I can't hear it, and I don't think many others can. So you should've know that peole would'nt hear it, and then NOT putting the fade out in the video. Cause you can't assume that people who hear the music for the first time will hear the smae small little details that one that has heared the same song a million times. Make sure peole that hear it for the first time DO hear what you hear.
You need to zoom in on the tracks in Vegas to correct those kinds of flaws.
If it wasn't one long flash, then what was it? And if it wasn't one flash, then you should've re-edited the video after you had watched the video outside of Vegas when you could see the problem, so that that would be fixed when you released it.
Still if it only were a filler you should've made the clip start earlier and the just speed it up alittle. Not alot work to do.
And about the credits: Exactly! Who gives a fuck?! No one does (unless they expect to be in it), but still everyone watches it. So, you should've made it more exiting. Cool intros makes a good first impresion, which is veeery important. Cool credits makes a good final impression, which is extremly important!
Oh, and if you think it's nitpicking.. Well, all these little, tiny, small errors or flaws make one BIG one. Think about it, if the Ats misspelled some of the names wrong, it didn't synch one or two times in the video, there was half a secund black gap in the video, on one filler you didn't get to see the stunt you only got to see the landing, and many such small problems. The video wouldn't be half as good as they are. So you HAVE TO watch the viedo and look for the smallest errors, the things you don't even think the weivers will see. And when you see them you have to go fix them. Cause if you don't the video won't be half as good as it can..
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Filefront link is now here.
FF link (http://files.filefront.com/Deceived_Finalwmv/;4089777;;/fileinfo.html)
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damn this movie had really sick stunts :o i really liked it. very good combo moves. no comments couse all the stunt are good.
this is a vid that gives mhuch inspiration :)
only bad point is the editting. it didnt feel good. you must take some more time with recording your stunts. just record a stunt and watch it in the fraps folder. i you see that you camera is in a wall or if you seee that its just didnt feel good record it again.
rating:
STUNTS: 9.5/10
editing: 6.5/10
music 9/10
total: 8/10
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Wow, who is this Omni dude? He's sick!...
But seriously, this is a year and 6 months old? Still the LV packer 2 roof to bump is the best...
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Lmfao, what a bump.
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Lmfao, what a bump.
Are you talking about the LV to roof 2 bump?
BTW i was trying that bump like a week before you released your vid. I still remember cause it was such a sweet stunt.
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dling
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You ain't seen it? ^
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dling.
edit.
all the links are dead p,ls reupppp...
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dling.
edit.
all the links are dead p,ls reupppp...
Look at the vid reupload topic in the Marketplace, theres probably a link up there.
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v0_ms6RstBw (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v0_ms6RstBw)
A youtube re-upload
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Nice video man , i liked it 9/10 .
But whats the name ? In the topic titel its "Deceived" , in the vid intro its "Decieved" , in the outo its "Deceived" again and on Youtube its "Decevied" .
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Deceived. I didn't notice I'd done that
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Great video, I love it. Congratz Omni.
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dling
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file not found
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file not found
maybe because its old?
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There is a youtube link on the 4th page. And on the first page now because this vid is too much
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thx
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nice video Omni
9.9/10