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GTA Series => Grand Theft Auto - San Andreas => SA Un-Modded Video Releases => Topic started by: Kejor on August 22, 2013, 11:03:01 AM

Title: Dead Bite
Post by: Kejor on August 22, 2013, 11:03:01 AM
Dead Bite (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q1oKWC_bMFY#)

Hello ! This is my new "solo" or I should say mini-solo or whatever.. Let's just say it's unfinished because I'm lazy as fuck xD. Click da liek buttonz if you like it , please [of course you like it ! :D]

Stunters:
-Kejor
-KeNN

Render Time: 30min

Song: Hollywood Undead - Dead Bite

Bye. ^^
Title: Re: Dead Bite
Post by: KeNN on August 22, 2013, 11:04:16 AM
really like cc and edit,you used some leftovers but video was cool  :a-cheer:
Title: Re: Dead Bite
Post by: FELIX on August 22, 2013, 11:55:55 AM
nice, a stunt of mine got relanded
Title: Re: Dead Bite
Post by: bLADE on August 22, 2013, 12:18:09 PM
You forgot a stunt, 0:06-0:08

Edit was too much and the stunts were okay but a lil random
Title: Re: Dead Bite
Post by: Kejor on August 22, 2013, 12:53:16 PM
You forgot a stunt, 0:06-0:08

Edit was too much and the stunts were okay but a lil random

Yeaa... wellfuck xD everytime i was looking at it in the folder , I was thinking to myself that it's already in the video.. Grrr
Title: Re: Dead Bite
Post by: Determined on August 22, 2013, 02:29:33 PM
Man, that edit is way too over the place, just seems really inconsistent when you start showing a stunt, then cut to a completely different part of it & so on, the 2nd part was a bit better in that regard. The vignette should've been blended in a lot more, those dark corners just don't look good, also lower the intensity, cause the colors were way too bright. Also fix your lags. All in all the editing was ok, but could've used a lot of fine tuning.

The stunts were meh, some cool ideas, but a lot of them seemed to be half-assed.
Title: Re: Dead Bite
Post by: Amaluna on August 22, 2013, 03:23:58 PM
Editing was annoying but the CC was really nice :)

Stunts were old but old is gold
Title: Re: Dead Bite
Post by: Paull on August 22, 2013, 09:41:30 PM
dat editing  :euro:
Title: Re: Dead Bite
Post by: blackdeath on August 23, 2013, 01:46:12 AM
Edit was horrible sorry.
Stunts were ok.
Title: Re: Dead Bite
Post by: NEM on August 23, 2013, 03:15:42 AM
God thanks that Ken didn't lame the second grind.
Title: Re: Dead Bite
Post by: Nager on August 23, 2013, 01:34:17 PM
About the ColorCorrection: ugly colors, the vignette is too much and don't look good at all. Also it's on some points to bright imo.

About the editing: first of all, the song quality isn't really good. Around 1:02 it sounds horrible. I was using Headphones and watched in 720p. Seriously, that destroyed the editing xD
Okay, the editing is not so bad as I expected. Could be better^^ just keep editing and improve.

About the stunts: was that a leftover solo? Because the most stuff is old and the rest not impressive :lol:

//PS: Don't get me wrong. I don't want to hate you. Just take it as criticism and just keep it going^^
Title: Re: Dead Bite
Post by: Kejor on August 24, 2013, 12:34:37 AM
About the ColorCorrection: ugly colors, the vignette is too much and don't look good at all. Also it's on some points to bright imo.

About the editing: first of all, the song quality isn't really good. Around 1:02 it sounds horrible. I was using Headphones and watched in 720p. Seriously, that destroyed the editing xD
Okay, the editing is not so bad as I expected. Could be better^^ just keep editing and improve.

About the stunts: was that a leftover solo? Because the most stuff is old and the rest not impressive :lol:

//PS: Don't get me wrong. I don't want to hate you. Just take it as criticism and just keep it going^^

Ok.. Thank you shadow :D I like editing more than stunting.. That's why I do that the most :D Trying to improve more and more ^^ But now my NewBlue is not working.. It freezes at installation.. :(
Title: Re: Dead Bite
Post by: JaiK on August 24, 2013, 11:08:33 AM
you got the potential for editing, thats a sure thing. But youll work on it  :happy:  just like a few already mentioned you did cut a lot of stunts and stuff but still very nice  :wub:  i hope ill see more from you  :D
Title: Re: Dead Bite
Post by: Rust on August 24, 2013, 12:31:09 PM
About the ColorCorrection: ugly colors, the vignette is too much and don't look good at all. Also it's on some points to bright imo.

About the editing: first of all, the song quality isn't really good. Around 1:02 it sounds horrible. I was using Headphones and watched in 720p. Seriously, that destroyed the editing xD
Okay, the editing is not so bad as I expected. Could be better^^ just keep editing and improve.

About the stunts: was that a leftover solo? Because the most stuff is old and the rest not impressive :lol:

//PS: Don't get me wrong. I don't want to hate you. Just take it as criticism and just keep it going^^
^
Title: Re: Dead Bite
Post by: Tg on August 25, 2013, 04:55:54 AM
The editing made it annoying to watch because of those flashes that take too long to disappear. and the quality was a bit LQish, practice more and you'll be better I guess.
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