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GTA Series => Grand Theft Auto - San Andreas => SA Un-Modded Video Releases => Topic started by: Biel on September 12, 2012, 05:57:09 PM

Title: Ondine
Post by: Biel on September 12, 2012, 05:57:09 PM
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I'm proud to present to you: "Ondine" :a-cheer:
A SA Collab organized and edited by me.
Old&New stunts are accepted.

Stunt performance by:
alieNboy
Basium
Biel
Determined
draguN
Derpy
ExRer
IceD
Named
Paull
Scavenger
Syny
PK
Waffy

Streaming:
Ondine (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6yMSOUCyCZU#ws)

Download links:
http://depositfiles.com/files/wvqyewjul (http://depositfiles.com/files/wvqyewjul)
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: Determined on September 12, 2012, 06:00:19 PM
Just for the record, all of my stunts have been released in various different vids, I had no idea Biel's gonna make a collab with them when I sent them to him  :lol:

Watching  :euro:

That was pretty cool, I liked Biel's double grind, Exrer's infy stunt & Scav's grind curb bump thingie, looked stylish!

The intro was beautiful, loved the shot & the colors, you could've given the text an outline though to make it more apparent. The vid itself was decently edited, the colors were, for the most part, good, for some clips they didn't look good, but for the majority they worked. The vid did feel a bit slow paced at times & that didn't fit the song too much, you should've implied some more cutting & synchronizing at some parts & maybe leave out the slower parts of the run ups. I liked your use of effects & sync as well as pan/crop, though you should work on your angles more, they were really uninspired at times, some of them were good, but most were average. Overall it's an enjoyable vid, though without its flaws, but pretty great for someone who's as experienced as you are  :euro:

Also the nametags were way too big & should've been in either of the corners, usually something like 22-28pt (depending on what font you're using) is fine.
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: Syny on September 12, 2012, 06:03:21 PM
Good video.

Fresh edit. Glad to see that you improved in editing.   ;)
A lot of oldies but that was okay.
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: Determined on September 12, 2012, 06:17:10 PM
The less fps you record with, the smoother the angles  :euro:
It's not really the movement as much as it is the placement, you want to show the stunt from the best possible angle, making it look better than it actually is.
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: Tg on September 12, 2012, 06:20:25 PM
Awesome video.... liked every bit of it... your improving and good job.
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: FTO on September 12, 2012, 08:17:50 PM
Enjoyable video despite the oldies. Determined's opener and Alienboy's tankbump were pretty good.
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: DeathMazhine on September 12, 2012, 08:58:26 PM
nice
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: Sheep on September 12, 2012, 10:35:27 PM
Damn, I was suppose to send you something :(

Nice collab anyways.
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: ExRer on September 12, 2012, 11:06:34 PM
Wow that was a fast and decent edit good job Biel i start loving you :D  :wub:
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: alieNboy on September 12, 2012, 11:11:47 PM
awesome video actually didn't expect that much :wub: the music choise was top ! :jajaja: for the stunts, not bad few stunts that I really liked, especially Scavanger stunt was just amazing :a-cheer: but some stunts like Biel's looked so strange :euro: :hmm: GJ overall, glad to be in this :) :happy:
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: Veno on September 12, 2012, 11:24:28 PM
Why is Determineds and Iceds name in different color?  :hmm:
Pretty cool edit actually, good job :]
Scavs stunt was really cool.
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: Art   on September 13, 2012, 12:02:59 AM
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Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: alieNboy on September 13, 2012, 12:17:24 AM
Quote from: Art on September 13, 2012, 12:02:59 AM
4:15 :wub:
i think there were maybe 3 new stunts, editing was kinda laggy, but it was ok overally
i dont like music used here
Quote
Why is Determineds and Iceds name in different color?
i think cause of they are in network crews
Syny is in network crew too :P I think it's because they are Veteran membes :jajaja: :jajaja:
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: Waffy on September 13, 2012, 03:29:56 AM
Awesome video  :happy: I was an****!!~!@@## I could send more stunts but,nah..
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: Basiµm on September 13, 2012, 03:43:38 AM
Basium's stunt was actually a crap, really enjoyed every single stunt and the editing was something special from you, keep on improving.  :)
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: tomiboy on September 13, 2012, 05:01:19 AM
the song was already used in exrer's solo...  :( editing was cool, alienboy, determined and scav stood out.
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: StrezZ on September 13, 2012, 05:36:57 AM
Actually the last stunt was old , also i guess stunting was alright i'll focuse more about editing since i think it was basically made for it.
Over all i think the video is cool
I liked the simple CC
I think you should work more on your cam angle and make them smoother when you turn around , even like at 1:41 you zoomed out but didn't showed it off , ( you should have put exrer stunt first and then you let it zoom out in the calm part or smth like that just to make it fit .
And you should also put more cam angle , i barely saw more than one for a stunt :/
Anyway the thing ive noticed the most in your video is that on the calm part of the song you don't put any effect and it's way to calm ( not sayin it's bad tho ) but when it become's a bit stronger you put too much effect , it doesn't fit together . I think thats all , cool video again dude.

Hope you read that , i don't comment video anymore and i made it for yours
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: MikeyMouse on September 13, 2012, 08:10:49 AM
I thought I had an accepted stunt for this  :blink:.

Anyway, it was a nice video, best part was definitely the intro, had a nice feel to it, as Determined pointed out the names needed an outline as I found myself struggling to see some of the names. The edit itself was of good quality, great use of effects but not over edited, so good job there. It had a bit of a strange pace to it though, seemed like you were rushing the stunts a little, not showing the end of grinds, and sometimes not even the run up really, only a second or so of it. Personally I think the song restricted you in that aspect, you had 30 odd stunts to record in a 5 minutes video, it's quite a big ask and you can really sense the sort of 'squeeze them in' feel to it. Next time find a song before you organise the collab, so that then you can work out how many stunts you reckon will fit in comfortably.

Great job and good luck in the future  :cc_detective:
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: NEM on September 13, 2012, 08:30:51 AM
aaah.. too much oldies , what's point of landing old stunts.. Anyway some stunts there were cool , Determined and alieNboy were nice. Editing was enjoyable but not best , nametags were too big , and bad choice of font. It was enjoyable anyway , at least you didn't use some skrillexbumboomdumb song. So good job everyone , oh and that ExRer's grind was used in Painkillers i guess ? But i understand he wanted to use it somewhere because Promagic is too lazy for upload. Oh and why is in line-up here on gtas Determined and IceD in orange color ?
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: Named on September 13, 2012, 09:10:41 AM
Quote from: FTO on September 12, 2012, 08:17:50 PM
Enjoyable video despite the oldies. Determined's opener and Alienboy's tankbump were pretty good.

It is an old stunt with leftovers collaboration, wow that triple grind by determined is just epic, loved that CC, iced ftw again, gj everybody
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: NEM on September 13, 2012, 09:27:17 AM
Quote from: Biel on September 13, 2012, 09:05:05 AM
Old&New stunts are accepteds in that collab. :happy:
Yep i know , but anyway , if you saw some stunts in next 5501 videos before , they become boring for you.
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: Named on September 13, 2012, 09:35:43 AM
Quote from: Nem  on September 13, 2012, 09:27:17 AM
Quote from: Biel on September 13, 2012, 09:05:05 AM
Old&New stunts are accepteds in that collab. :happy:
Yep i know , but anyway , if you saw some stunts in next 5501 videos before , they become boring for you.

You can choose watch or no that type of videos, anybody force you to watch  :lol:
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: NEM on September 13, 2012, 09:37:32 AM
Quote from: Named on September 13, 2012, 09:35:43 AM
Quote from: Nem  on September 13, 2012, 09:27:17 AM
Quote from: Biel on September 13, 2012, 09:05:05 AM
Old&New stunts are accepteds in that collab. :happy:
Yep i know , but anyway , if you saw some stunts in next 5501 videos before , they become boring for you.

You can choose watch or no that type of videos, anybody force you to watch  :lol:
Of course , just saying.
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: Biel on September 13, 2012, 09:38:46 AM
DL Link added. Requested by Waffy.
http://depositfiles.com/files/wvqyewjul (http://depositfiles.com/files/wvqyewjul)
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: IceD on September 13, 2012, 10:07:48 AM
Outstanding improvement biel, glad to be in the video 5/5
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: Waffy on September 13, 2012, 10:21:08 AM
Thank you Biel for uploading the vid  :wub:
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: DiptuS on September 13, 2012, 11:17:42 AM
good collab all in all

nice clean edit. I only disliked the name tags...A little bit too big imo.
And i dont like it when there are too many stunts in this short time..feels so pressed lol
but this is only my opinion
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: Ѕcavenger on September 13, 2012, 11:48:14 AM
Some guys liked my stunts, thank you.

The video was nice. It's always nice to see some legendary old classics relanded :)
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: corevil on September 13, 2012, 11:51:43 PM
sweet video guys. determined and biel stood but everyone did nice stuff. editing was a bit plane and some stunts were not showed correctly imo. overall nice job cabrones
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: Amaluna on September 15, 2012, 08:29:42 AM
ALIENBOY!!! WHY ??? Anyways... Scavenger did an amazing stunt... Really creative and a smooth execution.
Lost bump 2 Wallride 2 roof in LS to Alienboy :c
Lost ledge grind 2 Grind 2 Grind in LS to Determined...
Great job guys I always underestimated Biel @_@ \
I wish I sent something :(

NAMED, Stop laming every single stunt! :|
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: Diaz on September 15, 2012, 09:46:31 AM
Why are some names highlighted?

Some old stunts in the video and the music was also used I guess, but I enjoyed it a lot, Alienboy stood out the most and Scavemger's stunt was awesome. And Determined, what happened at your last stunt?  :lol:
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: Determined on September 15, 2012, 12:06:02 PM
Quote from: Diaz on September 15, 2012, 09:46:31 AM
Why are some names highlighted?

Some old stunts in the video and the music was also used I guess, but I enjoyed it a lot, Alienboy stood out the most and Scavemger's stunt was awesome. And Determined, what happened at your last stunt?  :lol:

I had landed that spot in all 3 possible ways: the vertical p2b, the double bump to roof & p2b to roof that I double bumped off of  :euro:

Quote from: 0versizeD on September 15, 2012, 08:29:42 AM
ALIENBOY!!! WHY ??? Anyways... Scavenger did an amazing stunt... Really creative and a smooth execution.
Lost bump 2 Wallride 2 roof in LS to Alienboy :c
Lost ledge grind 2 Grind 2 Grind in LS to Determined...
Great job guys I always underestimated Biel @_@ \
I wish I sent something :(

NAMED, Stop laming every single stunt! :|

All of my stuff is re-released, I released the ledge 2 double grind, as well as many others in February 2009  :euro:
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: alieNboy on September 15, 2012, 12:12:00 PM
Quote from: 0versizeD on September 15, 2012, 08:29:42 AM
ALIENBOY!!! WHY ??? Anyways... Scavenger did an amazing stunt... Really creative and a smooth execution.
Lost bump 2 Wallride 2 roof in LS to Alienboy :c
Lost ledge grind 2 Grind 2 Grind in LS to Determined...
Great job guys I always underestimated Biel @_@ \
I wish I sent something :(

NAMED, Stop laming every single stunt! :|
Ahh sry man :< this stunt sucks anyway but I had fun time landing it :P
Btw what "ALIENBOY!!! WHY ???" :D
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: mistakeys on September 15, 2012, 03:27:58 PM
lol nice video biel :D
Title: Re: Ondine
Post by: Shifftee on September 16, 2012, 02:49:10 AM
Determined and Biel  stood out for me... Invite me to the next collab.. :cc_detective:
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