GTAStunting
GTA Series => Grand Theft Auto - San Andreas => SA Un-Modded Video Releases => Topic started by: Tackleberry on July 16, 2005, 12:06:37 PM
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I´m back in business with "B(l)ack in Business".
Download it here:
TGA (http://www.thegamersalliance.com/?do=dynamic&file=B(l)ack_in_Business.rar)
Filefront (http://files.filefront.com/Black_in_Business;3945466;/fileinfo.html)
The video is quite long, almost 8 minutes. Therefore it´s alot of stunts in it and every stunt is performed with the NRG-500. No more to tell you about, it´s better that you see it instead of reading this crap... Maybe some stunts are "old", but I´m new here and haven´t seen so many movies. Have that in mind before you accuse me for anything.
I´m quite new to stunting, so you, who proboably are more experienced, will see many mistakes in it. Please tell me stuff I should learn and please give constructive criticism. I´ll be pleased with any comment.
With this movie I also want crews to discover me. Maybe I´m still not good enough, but I´m getting better every day.
Enjoy and thank you for watching!
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Awsome vid man. Just a few older stunts but no biggie.
Music 8/10
Stunts 9/10
Editing 10/10
Overall 9.2/10
good job keep up the good work.
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This video was allright, but it got boring pretty fast. None of the stunts were spectacular, but they were all farly good. The grinds were basically just driving the bike up to the rail and getting stuck on the rail, no krails or fast grinds. The stunts that landed on billboards were uninspired and very basic for San An. The video could have been shortned from 8 minutes by cutting away from stunts faster and removing some of the filler type stunts. I would like to see more variety also in a vid. The video was pretty good for someone who is new to stunting though. Thanks for sharing.
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DLing,if youve got the skill,im sure TMS will want you.Or ZF or SAST.Maybe even XSA.
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Not bad at all, pretty good in fact, just not super good editing, nice to hear Turbonegro in a video.
and a couple of new spots, or new approaches to spots.
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Thanks for the comments!
I like the way Free Mike writes, it´s stuff like that who makes me a better stunter. Thanks to you!
@GTA_Gangsta': You´re to nice, thanks you for the 9.2/10. Though I think it´s way to high.
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DLING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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looks good for an first vid B)
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D/L...
defenitatly not bad for a first vid. the only thing is to get higher P2B, and more variety. like car stunts.
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i have no constructive criticism, because it looks like you got all the basics.
stunts: 10/10
music: 10/10
editing: 10/10
overall: 10/10
GJ, Keep going
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Thanks for the comments!
I like the way Free Mike writes, it´s stuff like that who makes me a better stunter. Thanks to you!
@GTA_Gangsta': You´re to nice, thanks you for the 9.2/10. Though I think it´s way to high.
9.2 to high this guy gave you a 10 :blink:
anyway good job
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It was alright, oyu seem decent at grinds, so work on those, also practice packer bumps.
Decent first vid, look forward to seeing more.
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...you seem decent at grinds...
Yes, the grinds were only supposed to get variation more variation in the movie. But now, afterwards, I think it would be better to skip them.
As I wrote, all the criticism you give will help me getting a better stunter, thank you.
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Dling...
Can't Be worse than Pure Insanity. :D :P
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Thanks for the comments!
I like the way Free Mike writes, it´s stuff like that who makes me a better stunter. Thanks to you!
You certainly have potential and the fact that you learn from criticism instead of getting defensive about it will allow you to do even better and better in the stunting world. Glad I could help.
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The Billboards were pretty basic. The grinds were ok i guess :) It was very good for a first movie though, lot better than Pure Insanity.
Editing: 7/10
Stunts: 7.6/10
Music: 10/10 Good tempo.
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Anything with the editing that was bad? Got any tips for me?
I think I´ve learned more about stunting after reading your comments, but not about editing. Or I´ve learned to make the vid shorter and get rid of some stunts, but I want to know a bit more about transitions and effects.
Many questions, I know. Now it´s just up to you to answer them... :)
Thanks again!
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I am downloading it now :)
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I really enjoyed this vid...really good for a first..some really cool stunts like that boat PB that rocked man, and some other greats and nift stuff along the way...it was long so had filler but there was easily enough for a shorter great vid with just nice, new stunts...editing was great aswell, the font effects at the start and the synching were really great..music choice was also nice and I loved your mixing into Like The angel..it was AWESOME.. Anyhow man some old stunts and easy ones but just get your best stunts next time and your vid will be great.. 8.5/10
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I agree with everything that has been said :) Good job! 8/10
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[span style=\'font-size:15pt;line-height:100%\']Marklunds review of "B(l)ack In Business"[/span]
Filesize: 102 399 kb (102 megabytes)
Length: 07:58 (7 minutes & 58 seconds)
Codec: WMV
Intro music: The Hives - Back In Black
Main music: Turbonegro - The Age Of Pamparius
Main & Outro music: Rise Against - Like The Angel
Stunter: Tackleberry
Editing: Tackleberry
Took me about 9 minutes to download this one.
Good things, that I liked:- Great music with a good tempo.
- Some jawdropping stunts.
- Some really nice rotations.
- Good quality.
Bad things, that could be better:- Instead of using a white image to make the flash effects, use the brightness effect on a clip instead, it gives much better results.
- Next time, don't have those "Before stunt, drive around in the city" clips, they are very slow and is making the movie kinda boring.
- Not so good synching, there were flashes that got along with the music, but not much with the stunting and changing of clips.
- The intro were too long when you drove around in the city, could've been more action or something cool while he was driving around.
- Many grinds were pretty slow and boring, so next time, speed them up and it will look much better.
- Kinda too long vid, could be better to make 2 movies instead of one. You would have enough replays for that.
Very good first stuntvideo! I liked some of the stunts really much, such as the first stunt (jump2grind) and some high p2b's. The editing is good, but needs some improvements. The music is very good too, with nice tempo and it's rock. I hope you'll make another movie and find a crew. Really enjoyable movie, download it now!
7.2/10
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Thank you Marklund! I really appreciate that kind of reviews and I´ll try to learn from your excellent tips.
Thanks!
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Thank you Marklund! I really appreciate that kind of reviews and I´ll try to learn from your excellent tips.
Thanks!
If you got any questions, just hit me up on msn. ;)
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Downloading... :D
EDIT: Ok i watched it. It was quite a nice video dude. Though you used quite a few of the stunts from Buzzsaws gasoline...whether it is a coincidence or not i dont know. Grinds were as said by marklund, kinda slow and boring... One thing i commend you on are a few of the combos in your vid :D Nice work!
Stunts: 6.5
A few good ones in there but the rest were kinda ordinary :(
Editing 8
Your editing was solid apart from a few syncing problems
Music 9
Fast paced and exciting...went well i think
Overall
7.5/10
Nice job m8! Watch a whole lot of stunt vids and get inspired for your next vid :D