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GTA Series => Grand Theft Auto - San Andreas => SA Un-Modded Video Releases => Topic started by: FELIX on October 30, 2011, 09:32:58 AM

Title: Artifex
Post by: FELIX on October 30, 2011, 09:32:58 AM
Artifex (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZGTZR2P2I6E#ws)
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: PtRvY on October 30, 2011, 09:40:31 AM
Cool video bro :3 I like how you're trying to lean a little closer to overediting nowadays, it actually works. :P
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: [Bart] on October 30, 2011, 09:40:55 AM
I liked it! Good job!
I missed his squalo stunt from Haze btw
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: Markix on October 30, 2011, 09:42:57 AM
GJ Cloud i like it
nice edit  :euro: ;D
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: ŠtatiÇ on October 30, 2011, 10:04:52 AM
didn't liked the chosen weather and the cc..
some nice effeckts,but some unsynched and fail ones
gj
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: FELIX on October 30, 2011, 10:12:20 AM
didn't liked the chosen weather and the cc..
some nice effeckts,but some unsynched and fail ones
gj

Please let me know which effects were unsynched and which were fail, so I can improve.
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: ŠtatiÇ on October 30, 2011, 10:14:35 AM
didn't liked the chosen weather and the cc..
some nice effeckts,but some unsynched and fail ones
gj

Please let me know which effects were unsynched and which were fail, so I can improve.

0:00 - 0:59 except five or six seconds
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: FELIX on October 30, 2011, 10:18:30 AM
didn't liked the chosen weather and the cc..
some nice effeckts,but some unsynched and fail ones
gj

Please let me know which effects were unsynched and which were fail, so I can improve.

0:00 - 0:59 except five or six seconds

Your PC lags like hell dude. And if you mean those random flashes they were game lightnings.
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: ŠtatiÇ on October 30, 2011, 10:21:16 AM
Your PC lags like hell dude. And if you mean those random flashes they were game lightnings.

my pc runs black ob with high settings in 1920x1080 fluently and without laggs...
i can continue such things..it wont lag,promised!
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: FELIX on October 30, 2011, 10:27:18 AM
I love how I always gave constructive critism to your videos while you simply bash my stuff in your anger.
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: ŠtatiÇ on October 30, 2011, 10:32:18 AM
I love how I always gave constructive critism to your videos while you simply bash my stuff in your anger.
constructive critism? well..no comment
lets turn it around..
i say that effeckts are fail..you really think i will count every effeckt by its name etc.?


and this is even the first vid i gave my senf dazu if im right,or do you remember an other video?
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: FELIX on October 30, 2011, 10:37:37 AM
I love how I always gave constructive critism to your videos while you simply bash my stuff in your anger.
constructive critism? well..no comment
lets turn it around..
i say that effeckts are fail..you really think i will count every effeckt by its name etc.?


and this is even the first vid i gave my senf dazu if im right,or do you remember an other video?

Yes I told you what I really don't like about your vids. But I didn't tell lies because obviously those effects are not unsynched (I asked Baseline about a bigger review in msn and he said I need better cam angles and flow but the cc and effects were "very good").

You could atleast let me know which effects were fail by giving the exact time in the video but okay whatever.

I doubt this was the first vid where you gave your senf dazu but if it is like that then I did you wrong.
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: ŠtatiÇ on October 30, 2011, 10:51:32 AM
Yes I told you what I really don't like about your vids. But I didn't tell lies because obviously those effects are not unsynched (I asked Baseline about a bigger review in msn and he said I need better cam angles and flow but the cc and effects were "very good").

You could atleast let me know which effects were fail by giving the exact time in the video but okay whatever.

I doubt this was the first vid where you gave your senf dazu but if it is like that then I did you wrong.
you said my vids lag,for me and others they are smooth as hell,lol? that is the first thing
i can ask some other editors and i bet some of them also can see that some effeckts are unsynch...
detail so that you stop crying:
the blind in/out effects at 0:18 dont fit really imo
after that the tv simulator ended to quickly,what it maked unsynch
the first cam movements in vegas at the cabbie boost at 0:33 are unsynch and doesnt fit aswell
0:47 this effeckts when it turns a bit into black is unsych
the last radial blur effeckt is unsynch and doesnt fit,also i cant even hear a beat,drum etc. that makes it placed there
ich habe fertig,you're lucky now?
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: FELIX on October 30, 2011, 11:00:01 AM
Yes I told you what I really don't like about your vids. But I didn't tell lies because obviously those effects are not unsynched (I asked Baseline about a bigger review in msn and he said I need better cam angles and flow but the cc and effects were "very good").

You could atleast let me know which effects were fail by giving the exact time in the video but okay whatever.

I doubt this was the first vid where you gave your senf dazu but if it is like that then I did you wrong.
you said my vids lag,for me and others they are smooth as hell,lol? that is the first thing
i can ask some other editors and i bet some of them also can see that some effeckts are unsynch...
detail so that you stop crying:
the blind in/out effects at 0:18 dont fit really imo
after that the tv simulator ended to quickly,what it maked unsynch
the first cam movements in vegas at the cabbie boost at 0:33 are unsynch and doesnt fit aswell
0:47 this effeckts when it turns a bit into black is unsych
the last radial blur effeckt is unsynch and doesnt fit,also i cant even hear a beat,drum etc. that makes it placed there
ich habe fertig,you're lucky now?

Actually on the topic others said your video is slow too.

0:18 You think it doesn't fit, that does not make that correct.
Actually the TV Simulator goes till the flash.
0:33 I agree I forgot to sync the first 1 second pan&crop there.
0:47 the effect is beginning exactly on the beat I could have made it start a bit earlier but then it would have looked stupid imo.
Last radial blur is synched to the voice of the woman.

Yes I am happy now. Thanks.
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: Dundee on October 30, 2011, 11:42:25 AM
Flava + Statik = Liebe

Nah, great editing dude. I always like your cam angles and your clean edit but that was nice too.
Good job  :jajaja:
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: Shifftee on October 30, 2011, 12:26:00 PM
That was quite a good attempt on being Petar. :cc_detective:
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: VaNilla on October 30, 2011, 12:51:21 PM
Nice job, but I didn't really connect with the pacing. In my opinion a faster pace with offbeat transitions through the stunts would have worked much better at keeping it engaging, I feel like you stayed with each stunt for too long so things got too predictable. I also think the camera angles didn't tell a 'story', they didn't transition together very well IMO. It's not that the angles were bad because they were actually good, but something I'd work on is going back after finishing the edit and recording the angles so they transition together nicely once you know the order of the stunts. What I mean by this is that you shouldn't use similar camera moves one after the other, they should blend and reverse from clip to clip. On the positive side you had some pretty creative ideas with the effects, I liked that you matched the rainy weather with the mood of the song and the overall editing was good :)
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: FELIX on October 30, 2011, 03:32:16 PM
^ Thanks, and normally I focus more on camera angles but this time my main goal was to find some fitting effects because I was really really bored. :D
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: Determined on October 30, 2011, 09:14:05 PM
Yes I told you what I really don't like about your vids. But I didn't tell lies because obviously those effects are not unsynched (I asked Baseline about a bigger review in msn and he said I need better cam angles and flow but the cc and effects were "very good").

You could atleast let me know which effects were fail by giving the exact time in the video but okay whatever.

I doubt this was the first vid where you gave your senf dazu but if it is like that then I did you wrong.
you said my vids lag,for me and others they are smooth as hell,lol? that is the first thing
i can ask some other editors and i bet some of them also can see that some effeckts are unsynch...
detail so that you stop crying:
the blind in/out effects at 0:18 dont fit really imo
after that the tv simulator ended to quickly,what it maked unsynch
the first cam movements in vegas at the cabbie boost at 0:33 are unsynch and doesnt fit aswell
0:47 this effeckts when it turns a bit into black is unsych
the last radial blur effeckt is unsynch and doesnt fit,also i cant even hear a beat,drum etc. that makes it placed there
ich habe fertig,you're lucky now?

I love how it's still not constructive criticism  :lol: Where are the tips? Where's your point of view, suggestions on how to improve the vid?  :lol: Just grow the fuck up dude, you can show yourself as a way more considerate & respectable person if you don't hold a grudge against a few bad words CW has thrown your way & tried to look at it from his point of view, instead, you choose to continuously embarrass yourself. Why?  :lol: Just let go & chill the fuck out  ;)

Loved the vid cloudy, kinda made me think of what's going on inside a mind of a schizophreniac  :lol:
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: lilj on October 31, 2011, 03:20:00 AM
awesome stunts arti, one of my favorites from you, CW that was epic, keep doing these videos, you are amazing
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: FELIX on October 31, 2011, 05:26:38 AM
Thanks guys.  :wub:
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: NuclearDeath on October 31, 2011, 06:42:55 AM
Me likey  :jajaja:
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: Amaluna on October 31, 2011, 12:44:34 PM
cool stunts lol but idk anything about editting just yet :ffvsielj3:
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: Syny on October 31, 2011, 06:06:56 PM
Great editing cloudwalker   :wub:
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: electric on November 01, 2011, 02:14:06 PM
Ouch, at least you fitted the effects so perfectly though, good job :D
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: Tg on November 01, 2011, 05:46:03 PM
dude This is some Sweet editing  ;D and the stunt are Nice no joke realy :D  :wub:
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: mqtH on November 03, 2011, 06:21:27 AM
the editing was decent. Nice stunts :P
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: Reynard The Fox on November 09, 2011, 12:47:47 PM
Artifex needs to suck orre dick
Title: Re: Artifex
Post by: Basiµm on November 10, 2011, 06:20:50 AM
ARTHUR :|
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