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GTA Series => Grand Theft Auto - San Andreas => SA Un-Modded Video Releases => Topic started by: Veno on October 13, 2010, 02:16:51 AM

Title: YOU SLUT YOU
Post by: Veno on October 13, 2010, 02:16:51 AM

(http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/239/ysy.png)

aloha, story is this, i`m still learning/practising editing, so i wanted to edit, and asked some guys for stunts, also i don`t care if there`s, or they are lame or old, i just wanted to edit, thanks for watching and give some advice, cuz you know those coments " EDIT SUCK!!11" wont help. ahem byeh.

[noembed]YouTube (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZRuvtCxYlaI&feature=player_embedded)[/noembed]

Title: Re: YOU SLUT YOU
Post by: Scavenger on October 13, 2010, 02:28:00 AM

I have not seen anything that I like, sorry. :cheersad:

Title: Re: YOU SLUT YOU
Post by: LeaR on October 13, 2010, 02:45:56 AM

cool lamed 1st stunt :/

cc wa bad, song cool :)

Title: Re: YOU SLUT YOU
Post by: Determined on October 13, 2010, 03:23:09 AM

That was fast  :lol:

I know this isn't about the stunts, but from what I saw, I only liked the finisher.

The edit was ok, the cc was a little too dull & seemed really foggy, color effects were nice & overall flow & atmosphere of the vid was quite fitting.
Work on your angles  :cc_detective:

Gj Venom  :ajaja:

Title: Re: YOU SLUT YOU
Post by: Squeak on October 13, 2010, 04:05:32 AM

use more contrast, and still, make better cam angles

Title: Re: YOU SLUT YOU
Post by: MeetMyMeat on October 13, 2010, 04:36:58 AM

What a profound song.

Title: Re: YOU SLUT YOU
Post by: Kacknase on October 13, 2010, 07:59:47 AM

lolwtf, that song gave me earkanker

ok editing. the quality, cc and the cam angles were awful though :c

Title: Re: YOU SLUT YOU
Post by: Veno on October 14, 2010, 03:55:09 AM

Thanks for feedback  :ajaja:

Title: Re: YOU SLUT YOU
Post by: KasT on October 14, 2010, 04:26:08 AM

Keep on practicing, as you are getting better!
I really liked some parts, such as 0:23, i really liked the cam angle and the effect you used, even though you should have skipped to another angle, because it didn't look good at the part when he bumped. The cc wasn't really good, mostly because it did not fit the song theme. Appart from that, it was pretty dull and unappealing..i don't know, maybe because it was way too pink-ish. Overall, i can say i didn't really like the cam angles, you should practice on that too and also, try to make better cc's. Try to keep it clean and simple for the beggining. Good luck  ;)

Title: Re: YOU SLUT YOU
Post by: Shifftee on October 14, 2010, 06:04:11 AM

Well, practice and you will get better. ;)
But the things I disliked were : 1) That you didn't change your player skin, so everybody was Venomous. :D
2) I disliked thos buggy and bad camera angles. Practice on those!
3) Overbright CC which made the video it self look bad, the idea was nice to make everything yellow/orange but you failed a bit. :D
4) Editing was quite boring to be honest, you should have used more effects and stuff...
5) Chose a better song to edit to.

Quite stupid name too. 8D

Well practice mate!  :euro:

Title: Re: YOU SLUT YOU
Post by: JustCaus3 on October 14, 2010, 06:12:56 AM

Pretty cool looking vid, you're definetly making progress.. i liked some camera angles like on the opener the second cam angle, was really cool and intense but you should have just cutted it before the infernus hitted the bus, so there wouldn't have been a cam fuck.. but many other parts that i liked.. cool job, still work on your cc and cam angles and your videos are awesome  :ajaja: :ajaja: :ajaja: cool song also  :lol:

Title: Re: YOU SLUT YOU
Post by: Veno on October 14, 2010, 02:33:23 PM

Shifftee sūkā pipeli :P i`m trying but as i said befor I JUST DON`T KNOW how to make good angles and CC they are look good for my eye, dunno i maybe have a bad taste or something, anyway thanks for such an long and full of details helpfull coment! same goes for Kastey, thank ya too.
and JustCaus3 i think i kinda love you  :happy:
keep em coming guys, so i can improve better  :euro: