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General => General Discussion => Expression Section => Topic started by: Eric on September 14, 2007, 02:08:09 PM

Title: Goregrind Song...
Post by: Eric on September 14, 2007, 02:08:09 PM: Living Carcass

Rotting flesh, entombed
fermented eye balls exhumed
with a fork extract them and boil
them in an excrete rusted pot

Frantic disembowlment
with disgusting pus, vomiting
from alcoholic fumes
and solvent snorting

Anal tract fermenting
with the maggots rotting
the flesh, eating through the walls
and making a living carcass
Out of you.

(guitar solo)

Bleeding of the anus
vomiting the remains of the flesh
of your intestines, your teeth fall one by one
your embodiment of the living, this rotting disease
the horrible stench in your carcass
now you lie dead.

a tribute to Carcass, fucking br00tal band.

comments?
Title: Goregrind Song...
Post by: Olin on September 14, 2007, 02:25:23 PM: Turn this in asap to your poetry teacher.
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Post by: Eric on September 14, 2007, 02:47:37 PM: Quote from: Olin
Turn this in asap to your poetry teacher.

I shall, she shall faint.
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Post by: Ruchy on September 14, 2007, 03:37:51 PM: Awesome. How did you think about this?
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Post by: Eric on September 14, 2007, 03:41:46 PM: Quote from: Ruchy
Awesome. How did you think about this?

listening to loads and LOADS of Carcass.
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Post by: Paxton on September 15, 2007, 03:21:04 AM: Deep, good job.
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Post by: Eric on September 15, 2007, 08:56:00 AM: thank you, thank you, you guys are awesome.
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Post by: Auzas on September 15, 2007, 09:00:12 AM: Omg, i listen to rap, but this is fucking nice
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Post by: Rocka on September 15, 2007, 09:50:04 AM: I was eating a donut when I read that. Thanks Eric. : |
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Post by: Eric on September 15, 2007, 09:55:23 AM: Quote from: Rocka
I was eating a donut when I read that. Thanks Eric. : |

you're sickly welcome.
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Post by: Kenny on September 15, 2007, 10:02:15 AM: There are no solos in goregrind.
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Post by: Eric on September 15, 2007, 10:11:54 AM: Quote from: Kenny
There are no solos in goregrind.

in my world there are.
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Post by: Kenny on September 15, 2007, 10:20:12 AM: O
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Post by: Optical on September 15, 2007, 10:40:04 AM: Carcass was very good band and your song is awesome.
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Post by: Eric on September 15, 2007, 10:41:19 AM: Quote from: Optical
Carcass was very good band and your song is awesome.

yeah I know, they were freakin' awesome, thanks btw.
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Post by: Cody on September 15, 2007, 03:46:18 PM: PWNAGE
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Post by: Luky on September 15, 2007, 05:00:52 PM: Quote from: StormLexer
PWNAGE
What he said.
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Post by: Eric on September 15, 2007, 05:46:39 PM: thank you.
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Post by: Ferσή on September 15, 2007, 08:21:34 PM: nice big words jumbled together to sound brutal
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Post by: Eric on September 15, 2007, 09:01:49 PM: thank you again.
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Post by: Skyi on September 20, 2007, 12:52:41 AM: Pretty nice man, but the lyrics lacked the sense of humor and wits which Carcass' lyrics have. But then again, their lyrics is really hard to redo.
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Post by: brandon6199 on September 20, 2007, 02:36:31 AM: Carcass does own, and great poem eric